Friday, May 27, 2011

Poems on Loyalty

Please share your poems here.

4 comments:

fedekawage said...

The swallows of Kabul are great
the people in the story were in pain
The comotion that the law caused
was in a way a matter of following or not
the devotion in the way
meant the destruction a the end of the day implementing a violent way
The faithfulness of all
led to the controversy of following or not.

Abby VanHorn said...

Are you loyal,
when your anger just boils?
Do you stay committed,
when your spouse acts dimwitted?
Do you stay faithful,
when times are so painful?
The question is how loyal,
are you?

Morgan Osborn said...

Loyalty resides
deep within the soul
A friend for some,
an enemy for others
Reliability, trust, faith, and belief
are few of many companions that loyalty resides with
Despite anguish, mistrust, fear, and disappointment,
loyalty will always prevail
Are you?
Are you- loyal?
Loyal to me?
Loyal to the on ones who love you?
Loyal to the ones you love?
When challenges arise,
Will you?
Be?
Loyal?
The true test comes from deep within
If you are loyal, now is your time
Help others, help yourself, and cherish life
Be loyal, prove yourself.

Nathan Ralls Feldman said...

Loyalty is a word in which its meaning is deep
As I attempt to dissect it, it’s so hard I weep;
To begin I must create a list
A series of words that are hard to resist
Trust, faith, relationships, and reliability,
These are words that help define loyalty’s capability
Now I must break these words up into two categories;
Necessary and sufficient
To have loyalty you don’t necessarily need faith reliability or trust,
But it would surely be sufficient even if it’s not a must
Though the idea of relationships is definitely necessary
Relationships are a must for loyalty,
We all know that… it’s simply elementary